Wednesday, January 11, 2006


white paper
blue pen

so much room to roam
in this vast plain of thought

compliments and criticisms
pound there respective drums

love that is pure
and purity that is so white it is hard to bear

dirt under fingernails
why do I look to type these letters

colors on a canvas blend
to make the mess that is me


FTS said...

Very nice.

Thanks for stopping by. :)

UltimateWriter said...

well put. this is one mess we don't want to clean up:)

Frances Mackay said...

Hello David. thanks for visiting my site. I can return the compliment with feeling I enjoy you positive outlook and comments. (And you are so prolific.) Tends to be somewhat unusual these days. Shall certainly return to see what you are doing. frances

Bar Bar A said...

nice! very interesting

Snaggle Tooth said...

I've been making all these commentz today to catch-up, cause I've been forced to write long-hand this week, been workin on de-worming my machine n dealin with a schitzo-keypad.
Ya, we all like the pretty mess...