Friday, March 10, 2006

i wrote a poem

it is posted here
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Hot freaks
in high top sneaks
their blue eyelids blare
above the vapid stare
hear the cool and icy talk
see the wild and saucy walk
deep in the heart there is a boy
birthed from a child who lost his toy
became a man whose life so bland
he can not sit, or rest or stand
clinging to his arm a girl so sad
she the daughter, missing dad
they probe the night
and shun the light
bright colors fade
the play is played
we're actors all
since the fall
hot freaks


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its a new place for the new me
wrestling shirley for the keyboard was a hassle
so I got her a job in Las Vegas, shooting gunite on swimming pools.
she will be happier there.

Snow day in Big Bear lake, pictures to follow.
I do adore you, you know that?

6 comments:

Shelley said...

I couldn't get access to read it...said I had to sign in.

Barbara said...

Can't wait to see the pictures, Sugarloaf Mountain is so beautiful!

sister celtic said...

hey davily or shirid it snowed here too my girlfriend will be up this weekend and love it..have fun..

sister celtic said...

WOW WHAT ELSE CAN I SAY ABOUT YOUR POEM EXCELLENT!

DeeJay said...

Cool school daddio!

Jodes said...

I like it.